RHH: Rate/Hate my positive lyrics?
I wrote a little song about balancing positives and negatives to Mf Doom’s Lemon Grass
Adversity
-I feel good today,
-Honestly, the feeling’s quite strange
-As i step into the sun the scowl burns off my face
-A large grin begins to form in it’s place
-but the contradicting cold breeze hits about 4 minutes late
-Reminding me how i’m like a Satellite orbiting in space
-Separate from society often resorting to hate
-But when i’m out in the sun absorbing it’s rays
-I can’t help but feel the good vibes from the vibrant skies
-The snow is finally melting and birds are flying by
-Must be springs way of saying "I’ve arrived"
-Just as I fight the off the urge to scream "I’m Alive"
-I realize that spring break is coming to an end
-My sanity will be tested soon after the new week begins
-Sadly, the only things guaranteed on this earth are taxes and death
-You only got this life to live, might as well make it the best
Verse 2
-I stay positive although i’ve been warned
-That’s why you’ll see me smile at the beginning of the storm
-I guess it’s my own way of escape
-from life’s many difficulties and heartbreaks
-Just the other day, I passed by here my dream girl was working
-only to see her in the arms of another person
-Now i know their relationship will fall out for certain
-But i have to ask myself, why am I the one hurting?
-Oh well, this porcelain heart broke like any other
-Just to find out i never really loved her.
-As I look up I can’t deny the lucidity in my spirit
-Illustrating words that flow fluidly through my lyrics
-With the suns cycle on decline
-Night falls but i keep daylight on my mind
-For whatever is in store, i have to remember perfectly
-To stand strong and Smile in the face of adversity
I’m pretty confident in what i wrote, i would just like some constructive criticism